for Cracked3/5/2006 c1 
30Roadside Dryer
Wow, that was great. I like how it seems to shift in a way, shift in time periods. I can't wait for another chapter.
30Roadside DryerWow, that was great. I like how it seems to shift in a way, shift in time periods. I can't wait for another chapter.
2/27/2006 c1 34Iris Devine
so, does she really have a gunshot wound? Wouldn't she die if she got shot in the head? Wouldn't people help her? Is she psycho?
good, thopught provoking story. I like the repetition of the phrase "the day I didn't see him anymore."
34Iris Devineso, does she really have a gunshot wound? Wouldn't she die if she got shot in the head? Wouldn't people help her? Is she psycho?
good, thopught provoking story. I like the repetition of the phrase "the day I didn't see him anymore."