for White Shell7/21/2012 c1 
6Ophelia Schmit
God, why do I think that the girl looks like Kimbra? Eh, just ignore me on that comment...
Now, onto the serious things. I liked how your described the ocean to me. Keep writing, because I HAVE to read some more!
-Hermie, being the same girl who did almost the same thing while waiting to read the last Harry Potter book :P
6Ophelia SchmitGod, why do I think that the girl looks like Kimbra? Eh, just ignore me on that comment...
Now, onto the serious things. I liked how your described the ocean to me. Keep writing, because I HAVE to read some more!
-Hermie, being the same girl who did almost the same thing while waiting to read the last Harry Potter book :P
11/2/2006 c1 Melly
You got to update i'm in the dark here ;.;
P.S-the little mermaid is my all time favorite disney movie!
You got to update i'm in the dark here ;.;
P.S-the little mermaid is my all time favorite disney movie!
3/24/2006 c1 13Daughter-of-Louis
I miss you! Glad to see that you are still writing! I went on a bit of a hiatus with my story but I'm sure I'll get some inspiration somewhere :[ anways I like this I hope to see more of this-I just did a retelling of a fairy tale for my world literature class. I hope to see more soon!
Taco
13Daughter-of-LouisI miss you! Glad to see that you are still writing! I went on a bit of a hiatus with my story but I'm sure I'll get some inspiration somewhere :[ anways I like this I hope to see more of this-I just did a retelling of a fairy tale for my world literature class. I hope to see more soon!
Taco
2/25/2006 c1 7Rhapsody's Song
Well haven't we been busy? Getting into the fairy tale retellings, I see. Well all of them look quite promising, including this one. I hope you continue!
7Rhapsody's SongWell haven't we been busy? Getting into the fairy tale retellings, I see. Well all of them look quite promising, including this one. I hope you continue!