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for All Of A Sudden

2/24/2006 c1 7spaciireth
That's really adorable, sums up exactly how I feel about a certain someone in my life. I especially liked the "All of a sudden... I've learned how to smile/Because now I have someone who makes smiling worthwhile" line, I think it really captures it.
2/23/2006 c1 9Rhianika
Hey, really nice poem. I like the repetition and incandescent is an awesome word. Yes, that was kind of random but I had to mention it. Oh and I like the rhyming :) Nicely done.

Keep writing,

~Rhia

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