Just In
for Slave

12/20/2006 c1 31Suicidal Romance
wow. i can totally relate. there are tons of strange things i can't stop myself from doing that i wish i cant...when i try to explain to ppl, tho, they just think im krassi. *tear(for myself, b/c no one understands, and for happiness that i found someone else who actually does understand)*
7/2/2006 c1 113Travis C. Eckert
This is good.
6/6/2006 c1 86Isis lives
wow powerful! it just rolls on and on and on until you never want it to stop. But you do want it to stop. It's mind-boggling, I had to read it twice just to get my head around the amazingness of it!

Favourite lines: "I'm not the person you hate, I may not even be the one you love" because these are just so great. That confusion in there that shows that she doesn't even know who she is or what she is or how she feels anymore. Great job.

Keep writing, as always, Isis x
5/13/2006 c1 10Nova-Janna
I love this more than any of your other stuff.Brilliant.I love : "Helpless in this hellThis poetic tragedy"But mostly the second line. Great job.
4/26/2006 c1 593Morwain
interesting i like
4/24/2006 c1 125Le Rose Clair du Nuit
First, Thanks so much for your reviews. I really appreciate them. I love hearing from you. Nothing makes me more excited than to see I've got a comment from someone who was moved by my work.

Second, I'm glad you can relate. It means you can put what you feel into words and that's something amazing. You've inspired me to write more. I hope you continue to read.
4/20/2006 c1 5RedHairedWriter
I like this poem, it seems so simply stated, and still poetic. I can relate to the feeling that no one really knows you and you aren't even you. I think you partrayed that wonderfully. ;)

4/19/2006 c1 13Mortifer Amor Phasmus
Very deep. I think you described it really well.
4/1/2006 c1 31poemkitten7
Wow, very nicely written. I can totally relate. Sometimes, even I don't know who's inside my head controlling my every move, and my every thought. It's quite scary, but you get used to it after a while. Well done, and keep it up!
3/14/2006 c1 43je suis une pomme du terre
Me too. Every time I read one of your poems, it's like I see things through your eyes because you see them through mine whether you know it or not... does that make sense? It was meant to be a compliment. (lol :-P)
2/25/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
in a way we are all slaves to our own emotions~ our master, our friend and our greatest enemy~ forever a struggle~ great job

keep writing!
2/24/2006 c1 17wolfiel
This made me feel very curious and begin to wonder about the situation in my own head. The poem kind of made this connection with how I often feel... except usually there are other people's voices echoing along with my own, and all I can do is sit back and watch, eyes wide. This internal conflict was very well described, especially considering how few words were used.
2/23/2006 c1 6Affie
Hopefully you'll kill the stranger. Your much nicer with her.Very good poem

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service