for Something Worth Remembering4/24/2006 c5 howw do you delete an account
lol heyy i saw that you posted this chapter earlier but FP wouldn't let me read it.
Anyway, yes, update sooner dear! I had totally forgotten she was kidnapped etc.
Who's Nel?
lol heyy i saw that you posted this chapter earlier but FP wouldn't let me read it.
Anyway, yes, update sooner dear! I had totally forgotten she was kidnapped etc.
Who's Nel?
4/24/2006 c5 kjnhgtfrdefgh
Hmm, this looks really interesing. Ally cracks me up lol. Please update soon dude, I can't wait for more.
- the Celie
Hmm, this looks really interesing. Ally cracks me up lol. Please update soon dude, I can't wait for more.
- the Celie
3/14/2006 c4 howw do you delete an account
Interesting...
i don't totally understand what's going on anymore though.
Interesting...
i don't totally understand what's going on anymore though.
3/14/2006 c4 
1AngelQt82217
sounds like a pretty good story so far, nd i can't believe that Jake would hit a girl... Thats horrible... Alright, i can't wait for ur next update!
1AngelQt82217sounds like a pretty good story so far, nd i can't believe that Jake would hit a girl... Thats horrible... Alright, i can't wait for ur next update!
2/27/2006 c1 1Felicia Harte
I love the opening, and how it ties in with the ending. The cliche of Zach (the "jock" brother) makes me smile. I hope you'll continue this soon... oh wait, you've already updated up to 3 chapters. Ha, guess I can go read those. Yay! So yeah, I'll be reading. ;)
1Felicia HarteI love the opening, and how it ties in with the ending. The cliche of Zach (the "jock" brother) makes me smile. I hope you'll continue this soon... oh wait, you've already updated up to 3 chapters. Ha, guess I can go read those. Yay! So yeah, I'll be reading. ;)
2/24/2006 c1 Macky Keith Acer
I found this story to be very direct and postive. I love the animation of the girl's view of her life. However, I felt the author may be rung away from her plot, if such one exists. After completing it left me, as the reader, clueless and uninterested if I should return for a second chapter. I felt like she should have explained about the guitar eariler, because it ruined my excitement of the current time. However, I find it perfect as it is, because the point it begins with, it also ends with-sleep. I can feel this author's inspiration by that simple tidbit.
I found this story to be very direct and postive. I love the animation of the girl's view of her life. However, I felt the author may be rung away from her plot, if such one exists. After completing it left me, as the reader, clueless and uninterested if I should return for a second chapter. I felt like she should have explained about the guitar eariler, because it ruined my excitement of the current time. However, I find it perfect as it is, because the point it begins with, it also ends with-sleep. I can feel this author's inspiration by that simple tidbit.