for Bloodied tears upon a fallen angel3/7/2006 c1 
24The FiboNACHI Sequence
hey!
i like this a lot... it has a great rhythm... yes, i know i said i wanted some free verse but you never listen to me, lyss!
nach
24The FiboNACHI Sequencehey!
i like this a lot... it has a great rhythm... yes, i know i said i wanted some free verse but you never listen to me, lyss!
nach
2/28/2006 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
Cool! Is this the one you 'wouldn't show me cause it wasn't finished'? If so then :P! I read it! If not then ...show me! please?This was awesome! I like nice rhyme! Love rhyme and the rhythm was awesome, not to mentiont eh imagery. well written
39SliversofSilverPainCool! Is this the one you 'wouldn't show me cause it wasn't finished'? If so then :P! I read it! If not then ...show me! please?This was awesome! I like nice rhyme! Love rhyme and the rhythm was awesome, not to mentiont eh imagery. well written
2/24/2006 c1 4darkShadow201068
I like it...you know, you could probably use this to make a pretty good story.The poem could become more emotional if you gave the angel a name or someone they could relate to. If she had a name it would make her more concrete.
4darkShadow201068I like it...you know, you could probably use this to make a pretty good story.The poem could become more emotional if you gave the angel a name or someone they could relate to. If she had a name it would make her more concrete.