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8/19/2011 c1 7A-Crimson-Memory
Oh my god. Speechless. I'm rendered speechless right now. Damn woman your stories are deep! You are definitely one of my favorite authors of FP and I hope that I grow up to be half as good at writing as you are! All your stories just inspire me to write and I think during school I'll be writing little one shots and it's thanks to you! You've opened my creative juices! You are really inspiring and I think youre my writing-idol
12/18/2010 c1 2Dakota R
aaw it's cute =) !
4/25/2010 c1 MayIFall
This is a really good piece. It's been a while since I've cried reading anything. There's so much emotion behind all the words and I feel like you could've definitely took a step forward and made this even more dramatic and heart-wrenching. Hell, I wanted Oliver to leave Caden because he 'had needed space to think about things.'

I enjoyed this piece quite a lot. I'm kind of hoping for a remake (and I know this is highly unlikely) or sequel of some sort (which is probably improbable :D). Lovely work story here.
4/13/2010 c1 5VampireNightX
THat was SO cute! :D
12/20/2007 c1 True.Randomness
A short but touching story. It held so much emotion that it made it more real than many other stories.
5/27/2007 c1 2Rock on an Ocean Shore
Great one-shot. It seemed like a bittersweet sliver of life.

I think Caden and Oliver just tried too long to live up to being the "golden couple." It's better when they accept that their relationship has flaws and try to better them.

In my opinion, you might have started the one-shot with Caden opening the door and all the thoughts that go through Oliver's head rather than with the paragraphs that describe rather than show the state of their relationship.

It's just a suggestion, really. I'm always a hypocrite when it comes to giving advice about stories. I don't follow half my own suggestions.

I've really enjoyed reading this, though. The way you described their relationship was tangible and realistic. Great job.
5/7/2007 c1 This Account is Abandoned
Man, this very nearly made me cry.

Beautifully written!
3/13/2007 c1 48Katja de Wit
That was truly amazing. :]
11/26/2006 c1 4Nikkorz
That was absolutely one of the best stories that I have ever read.

I was like bawling my eyes out, but it was so good.
7/3/2006 c1 5kimper
Beautiful. :)
5/31/2006 c1 20love.strawberries
This one hurt... But it was so beautiful... *sigh* It seems like I can't do much but sigh after reading one of your stories...
3/3/2006 c1 Zephyr Tenshi
What an amazing story! Caden and Ollie both sound incredibly gorgeous. And silk boxers...it makes my spine tingle in the most delicious way! This story is a perfect example of when not to interupt while someone else is talking...very Erin Brockovich-esqe. Great attention to detail and fluidity. Keep up the good work!Kisses,Me

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