for Cover Up2/26/2006 c1 
121Seeker of the Way
good poem on body fascism! Men get it a little, but are more BRAINWASHED into expecting perfection or better said what SOCIETY tells them to look for. And women are the instigators, did you know? They have the power to give the "come hither look" so, you have to control THEM first! Control them, you control the men, AND you control the children and thus the poisonous cycle just keeps on going! You shoudl read about body fascism, it's crayze! We are a modern peoples, it's insane this still goes one.
OH! I FoRgOt to say on the MOON one. 1) yes, I remember when I told you about the rocket ship. ALSO 2) forgot to say you did a good job with that extended metaphor! Two Gold Stars for joZie!
121Seeker of the Waygood poem on body fascism! Men get it a little, but are more BRAINWASHED into expecting perfection or better said what SOCIETY tells them to look for. And women are the instigators, did you know? They have the power to give the "come hither look" so, you have to control THEM first! Control them, you control the men, AND you control the children and thus the poisonous cycle just keeps on going! You shoudl read about body fascism, it's crayze! We are a modern peoples, it's insane this still goes one.
OH! I FoRgOt to say on the MOON one. 1) yes, I remember when I told you about the rocket ship. ALSO 2) forgot to say you did a good job with that extended metaphor! Two Gold Stars for joZie!
2/25/2006 c1 15Gorgeous Courage
Wow. i really saw the point that you made in this poem. Awesome job!
Thanks so much for the review on "My Words To You: The Justin M Tribute" i really appreciated it. :)
~Randi
15Gorgeous CourageWow. i really saw the point that you made in this poem. Awesome job!
Thanks so much for the review on "My Words To You: The Justin M Tribute" i really appreciated it. :)
~Randi
2/25/2006 c1 44Dark-Light39
so true, so true, girls try to shape themselves into something else to try and make themselves sometihng "better" when people that are true to themselves, and dont try to embelish and pull a disguise are those who you'd rather meet. Lovely poem, you really get the message accross in a great way =D
44Dark-Light39so true, so true, girls try to shape themselves into something else to try and make themselves sometihng "better" when people that are true to themselves, and dont try to embelish and pull a disguise are those who you'd rather meet. Lovely poem, you really get the message accross in a great way =D
2/25/2006 c1 14Imagined
I like the way you put this out there. It puts a lot of explaination into words from what's in our minds the whole time. Terrific Job!:)Thanks for your reviews! I'm glad someone will read!
14ImaginedI like the way you put this out there. It puts a lot of explaination into words from what's in our minds the whole time. Terrific Job!:)Thanks for your reviews! I'm glad someone will read!
2/24/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
great meaning in this~ you did a good job expressing it~ nicely done
keep writing!
132mizu no kokorogreat meaning in this~ you did a good job expressing it~ nicely done
keep writing!
2/24/2006 c1 42Britani- Friend of the Bears
Bravo! i really like it...great job! also thanks for reviewing :)
42Britani- Friend of the BearsBravo! i really like it...great job! also thanks for reviewing :)
2/24/2006 c1 6xlostxalonex
I like it really gets into details about what she has to do to be "cool" Like any normal teenager
6xlostxalonexI like it really gets into details about what she has to do to be "cool" Like any normal teenager