
6/7/2006 c1
11Autumnymph
Very interesting story =)
I love your style of writing. It seems very mature to me.
Although I have to say. The Journey II touched me more than this one.

Very interesting story =)
I love your style of writing. It seems very mature to me.
Although I have to say. The Journey II touched me more than this one.
3/3/2006 c1
241Werewolf Nighteyes
Read this in the written form, actually. So you put it up here, huh? I can see why- it really is quite good. I especially love how you opened and closed with the same place and the same tone. Great piece of work here. Keep it up!

Read this in the written form, actually. So you put it up here, huh? I can see why- it really is quite good. I especially love how you opened and closed with the same place and the same tone. Great piece of work here. Keep it up!
2/27/2006 c1
13Shadowhound
beautiful. i use that word rarely because i dont't often find works that fit that description. this is just beautiful. i love the descriptions, the emotions running rampant through the story, everything. you did a magnificient job on this.
Shadowhound

beautiful. i use that word rarely because i dont't often find works that fit that description. this is just beautiful. i love the descriptions, the emotions running rampant through the story, everything. you did a magnificient job on this.
Shadowhound