for My Mission to the Moon11/22/2008 c1 John True
Sorry about the first review, it's so ... clinical. I think I was still trying to work things out with what happened to us, I'm sorry, so obviously I wasn't speaking from my heart. My heart wanted to scream so I closed it off for the first review.
But now it is 11/2008. I feel much better now, so I wanted to review this again.
...
Thank you for listening, for remembering, for caring, for sharing. This poem means so much to me. To know you really saw me and cared about me this much, to listen to follow what I said not because you had to but because you could bring it into yourself where it made sense.
I love you
I am so proud of you
You are a walking miracle
I miss you so much right now!
I learned so much about myself because of you. I could not be here as I am today without you. I do not regret helping you with your mission to the moon.
Just know I will always be here for you.
always
in reality, you will never really be alone. You will always have my love. Use it to find the Kingdom within and so live forever, my dearest friend.
Love, forever, John
Sorry about the first review, it's so ... clinical. I think I was still trying to work things out with what happened to us, I'm sorry, so obviously I wasn't speaking from my heart. My heart wanted to scream so I closed it off for the first review.
But now it is 11/2008. I feel much better now, so I wanted to review this again.
...
Thank you for listening, for remembering, for caring, for sharing. This poem means so much to me. To know you really saw me and cared about me this much, to listen to follow what I said not because you had to but because you could bring it into yourself where it made sense.
I love you
I am so proud of you
You are a walking miracle
I miss you so much right now!
I learned so much about myself because of you. I could not be here as I am today without you. I do not regret helping you with your mission to the moon.
Just know I will always be here for you.
always
in reality, you will never really be alone. You will always have my love. Use it to find the Kingdom within and so live forever, my dearest friend.
Love, forever, John
2/26/2006 c1 
4xXdriftingxXxawayXx
Wow, you are a great poet. To answer your question, yes, I get good ideas late at night, usually before I go to sleep.
4xXdriftingxXxawayXxWow, you are a great poet. To answer your question, yes, I get good ideas late at night, usually before I go to sleep.
2/26/2006 c1 121Seeker of the Way
If this is for a CLASS, watch the number of syllables per line, and make it consistant from stanza to stanza, unless you change the WHOLE stanza. Like, I'd change it to "Like a falling star" maybe cause then it has 5 syllables, and then the one under it seems to have 4. =O I don't know why you thik I'm good at reviews #_# ANYWAYS it's Milky Way, not Milk Way you BOOB.Yeah, it is ALMOST singsongy, but good, Hallmark Greeting Card kind of singsongy (that's a compliment, I hope *hides*).
121Seeker of the WayIf this is for a CLASS, watch the number of syllables per line, and make it consistant from stanza to stanza, unless you change the WHOLE stanza. Like, I'd change it to "Like a falling star" maybe cause then it has 5 syllables, and then the one under it seems to have 4. =O I don't know why you thik I'm good at reviews #_# ANYWAYS it's Milky Way, not Milk Way you BOOB.Yeah, it is ALMOST singsongy, but good, Hallmark Greeting Card kind of singsongy (that's a compliment, I hope *hides*).
2/25/2006 c1 9Tsukage
This is good writing...u write kinda like my friend...though im not sure if she posted any of her poems up yet...SWEET JOB!
9TsukageThis is good writing...u write kinda like my friend...though im not sure if she posted any of her poems up yet...SWEET JOB!
2/25/2006 c1 16oh.augustine
I love the idea of this poem!And thank you so much for your review. I think your writing is fantastic too.:)
16oh.augustineI love the idea of this poem!And thank you so much for your review. I think your writing is fantastic too.:)