for Joysong7/31/2007 c1 
47thyme and place
Hmm... good, but dalie ounds like he isn't so great, don't you think? The poem is good, but the cause seems lost, and so does the poem.
47thyme and placeHmm... good, but dalie ounds like he isn't so great, don't you think? The poem is good, but the cause seems lost, and so does the poem.
3/21/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This gives off such a light, self confident feeling. Represents the title so truly. It really swirls with the action. Good work.
879Moondog DozierThis gives off such a light, self confident feeling. Represents the title so truly. It really swirls with the action. Good work.
2/25/2006 c1 5Drops of Jewpiter
great poem, i really love the first line and then the last two lines. good job ;)~dropsofjewpiter~
5Drops of Jewpitergreat poem, i really love the first line and then the last two lines. good job ;)~dropsofjewpiter~