for Traitor2/28/2006 c1 
132mizu no kokoro
i can relate, the feeling is simply awful to endure... good work
keep writing!
132mizu no kokoroi can relate, the feeling is simply awful to endure... good work
keep writing!
2/26/2006 c1 11les petits bateaux
Yeap, we've all gone through this before. The friends-backstabbing thing, is really really heart-wrenching. Good cinquain, good cinquain.
11les petits bateauxYeap, we've all gone through this before. The friends-backstabbing thing, is really really heart-wrenching. Good cinquain, good cinquain.
2/25/2006 c1 28Most Immature
I feel sorry for that happened to you...
If that person reads that, she has to feel sorry... It just... suck...
28Most ImmatureI feel sorry for that happened to you...
If that person reads that, she has to feel sorry... It just... suck...
2/25/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
Wow, the last word is so powerful by itself. Excellent cinquain! I'm impressed! Write on!
~Anna~
81Princess-anna57Wow, the last word is so powerful by itself. Excellent cinquain! I'm impressed! Write on!
~Anna~
2/25/2006 c1 5Drops of Jewpiter
good job; i know how hard it is to sometimes have to stick 2 a certain amount of syllbales, but you did a great job w/ it.~dropsofjewpiter~
5Drops of Jewpitergood job; i know how hard it is to sometimes have to stick 2 a certain amount of syllbales, but you did a great job w/ it.~dropsofjewpiter~