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3/24/2007 c2 33BoReD tO dEaTh
Montana lightning storms are the best. u just sit in the rain. best experences ever. and you might want to check your spelling in the first few paragraphs.
2/6/2007 c13 Kelley
You are so hard on yourself. I like a good story, one that makes you want more and this story keeps you hooked.

I think it is fine writing and aren't all love stories Cliche'?

Makes me want to move to Montana...
6/12/2006 c17 4Gilly Bean2
I really could have liked this story, except that the characters were all exagerated and over-drawn. I could not understand how Kina could hate Jeremy when she was the one that was always one foot out the door when they were dating. He would have every right to hate her, but she really has no grounds for her hate. I mean, what did she want him to say when she told him she was leaving? He couldn't stop her, she made that clear, so he said the only thing he could-that he wished she would be happy. I guess I also don't see the allure of Montana. I love wide open spaces and the woods and all that, but I hated Montana when I was there. It is beautiful and nice for a short time, but I went stir crazy. Anyway, there were grammatical errors, as well. The plot could have been really good, but I just don't buy the characters.
5/25/2006 c17 10Queen Of The Dragonslayers
Hmm...I usually don't submit reviews when the stories are finished but I am for this one because it was just finished.Just wanted to say that this was really awesome and I think I am going to review some of your other things.Right now I am wondering where I got your screen name from. I think I got it off of bribeluga's favorite list...Well, good job!
5/16/2006 c17 1Light tears
very good ending, i really liked it, i'll go adn find some of your other stroies if you have any lol, and you can look out for one i'm bout to start! lol
5/13/2006 c16 Me
Lotsa bad grammar and spellimg mistakes. The story seemed rushed, especialy in the last chapter.The plot though, was great. Some parts made me want to cry.. but thats probably cause I'm pregnant. You didn't need to know that, so ok.Great job!
5/13/2006 c16 Light tears
yay! i'm not the only one doing back in one class! lol loved it!
5/12/2006 c15 Light tears
It was great! I like cheedoes too!Yep, hate grounding too lol, no i got grounded for grades, yay me! lol. Wish it was somehting good though! lol
5/7/2006 c14 Light tears
loved it as usual, post more soon, sorry i was grounded so it took me such a long time...please post some more.
5/2/2006 c13 Light tears
omg...i really actually like this story even if it is cliche, i still love it, its romantic, sweet, and something that could actually happened!

I liked this chapter, but i think the last one was alittle better...lol

post more soon!
5/1/2006 c13 8brittle.star
ooh la la, ooh la la la la... "I wish that i knew what i know now, when i was younger" lol, i always think of that song when i read your story :P AWESOME AS FLYING ANTELOPES (which are pretty awesome if i do say so myself)
4/28/2006 c12 1Light tears
I LOVED THEM! post more soon!
4/13/2006 c10 lacyoriginality
hey lacy here, great chapter...and btw for what you said in your last review of S.H. i decided to write a large bolded explanation, so that it was hard to miss, just so people wouldn't get confused as you hinted at, thanks for that btw, I guess it wsa pretty confusing...

Lacy
4/13/2006 c10 lacyoriginality
hey lacy here, great chapter...and btw for what you said in your last review of S.H. i decided to write a large bolded explanation, so that it was hard to miss, just so people wouldn't get confused as you hinted at, thanks for that btw, I guess it wsa pretty confusing...

Lacy
4/9/2006 c10 NO LONGER USING
Aww..I feel so terrible, I haven't reviewed in a long time, and you've still reviewed faithfully...(blushes) sorry, i feel so bad, anyway since I know it was kind of confusing for those who're reading I decided to write an uber long..explanation of the reason I'm doing a revise...I can't stand my story actualy Superficially Honest- it's badly written - thank you us so much for still reviewing even though it's not that great a story...and you know what I'll try to keep ontop of reviewing from now on..now if onely my life weren't so crazy...argh...I'm supposed to be having fun on Spring Break, but change of events...I'm not...(frowns) oh well. at least I remembered to come here and read an excepionally awesome stroy...and thanks for the tip...

~~Lacy~~
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