for The Escalos Empire2/26/2006 c1 
22marinawings
this seems like a very fascinting story so far. full of promise. i really like it. some of the details are kinda technical for me, but i think that's just me and it's not really a problem with you. this is great so far. i think you've created a very real world. at least, it feels real to me. i like it. i can't wait to see what happens next!
22marinawingsthis seems like a very fascinting story so far. full of promise. i really like it. some of the details are kinda technical for me, but i think that's just me and it's not really a problem with you. this is great so far. i think you've created a very real world. at least, it feels real to me. i like it. i can't wait to see what happens next!