
3/25/2006 c1 finished
"it was obvious how she died / it was from a broken heart"
i LOVED this part.
this was a great way to tell such a sad story, and you pulled it off very admirably. i liked it a lot.
"it was obvious how she died / it was from a broken heart"
i LOVED this part.
this was a great way to tell such a sad story, and you pulled it off very admirably. i liked it a lot.
3/1/2006 c1
3born2read
aww...raya...that was sad..i loved it...(which u already no cause i told u earlier)it was heartfelt...lol...

aww...raya...that was sad..i loved it...(which u already no cause i told u earlier)it was heartfelt...lol...
2/25/2006 c1
14fakesmile5
OMG i have no idea on how you havent gotten any reviews so far! this poem is good! its alike to my style of writing but with a twist i really like it! good *applauses* if you want read mine ^_^ reaview please!

OMG i have no idea on how you havent gotten any reviews so far! this poem is good! its alike to my style of writing but with a twist i really like it! good *applauses* if you want read mine ^_^ reaview please!