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23Kyoko-sama
Hi !
I m sorry to write you this kind of review but someone stole your story and sell it on Amazon. See : .fr/Web-Lies-English-gendut-marindut-ebook/dp/B075HZ7L9R/refsr_1_2?sdigital-text&ieUTF8&qid1505234035&sr1-2&frefgc&dti556521977850917#reader_B075HZ7L9R
You have to prevent Amazon and your fans ! Hurry !
23Kyoko-samaHi !
I m sorry to write you this kind of review but someone stole your story and sell it on Amazon. See : .fr/Web-Lies-English-gendut-marindut-ebook/dp/B075HZ7L9R/refsr_1_2?sdigital-text&ieUTF8&qid1505234035&sr1-2&frefgc&dti556521977850917#reader_B075HZ7L9R
You have to prevent Amazon and your fans ! Hurry !
1/21/2015 c28 MusicGurl8129
Oh god, thank goodness Lynne is back. It was getting so hard to root for her, feel anything for her. It was getting hard to even continue this story. I'm proud so far. I know it will be hard for her, but she's doing it anyways and that is enough for me right now.
Oh god, thank goodness Lynne is back. It was getting so hard to root for her, feel anything for her. It was getting hard to even continue this story. I'm proud so far. I know it will be hard for her, but she's doing it anyways and that is enough for me right now.
1/21/2015 c27 MusicGurl8129
Finally. Now I have an ounce of respect for Lynne, hopefully she won't disappoint again.
Finally. Now I have an ounce of respect for Lynne, hopefully she won't disappoint again.
1/21/2015 c26 MusicGurl8129
Ugh... the only chracter I can respect at all is Denny. Lynne is making me sick.
Ugh... the only chracter I can respect at all is Denny. Lynne is making me sick.
1/21/2015 c20 MusicGurl8129
Uhh.. I'm pretty pissed with Eva-the group-right now. They accepted her into the group without even asking her first, and then Eva tells her that if she doesn't use the ''power'' or ''money'' the group gives her they will send her to jail. That is blackmail. Apparently the group hasn't learnt anything at all.
And what disgusts me the most is that Lynne actually is okay with it. Or that she claims to ''understand'' it. The group is selfish and greedy by using Lynne like this, especially by telling her she has to put out the story of her Dad being an alcoholic. I mean, the secret/blackmail is practically empty, her Dad is gettng better (so far) so it doesn't matter. It's not really Lynnne's business to put it out there, or the group either anyway.
It is getting hard to read this with Lynne's narrowmindness and stupidity. She has no backbone and is bending to all of the groups wished already. Ugh.
Uhh.. I'm pretty pissed with Eva-the group-right now. They accepted her into the group without even asking her first, and then Eva tells her that if she doesn't use the ''power'' or ''money'' the group gives her they will send her to jail. That is blackmail. Apparently the group hasn't learnt anything at all.
And what disgusts me the most is that Lynne actually is okay with it. Or that she claims to ''understand'' it. The group is selfish and greedy by using Lynne like this, especially by telling her she has to put out the story of her Dad being an alcoholic. I mean, the secret/blackmail is practically empty, her Dad is gettng better (so far) so it doesn't matter. It's not really Lynnne's business to put it out there, or the group either anyway.
It is getting hard to read this with Lynne's narrowmindness and stupidity. She has no backbone and is bending to all of the groups wished already. Ugh.
1/20/2015 c16 MusicGurl8129
Okay, Lynne's being stupid. She can't really be falling for Caysee's crap.
Okay, Lynne's being stupid. She can't really be falling for Caysee's crap.
9/26/2014 c39 Barsha
it was awesum... its one ov my favourite stories in fictionpress...it was soooo good...sad dat it came to an end...but i really wished dat all frnds (the group) to b in contact... specially to Denny ns Lynne... still it was good!... thumbs up! :)
it was awesum... its one ov my favourite stories in fictionpress...it was soooo good...sad dat it came to an end...but i really wished dat all frnds (the group) to b in contact... specially to Denny ns Lynne... still it was good!... thumbs up! :)
12/2/2013 c38 Secrets
I love ur story!
I love ur story!
8/12/2013 c39 Guest
This story was truly amazing... thank you so much :)
This story was truly amazing... thank you so much :)
8/11/2013 c24 Guest
Oh yay the broke up! TEAM LYNNE AND DENNY ALL THE WAAAY
Oh yay the broke up! TEAM LYNNE AND DENNY ALL THE WAAAY
5/25/2013 c24 Guest
Yay!
Yay!
5/24/2013 c13 Guest
She's prego, isn't she?
She's prego, isn't she?