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2/27/2006 c1 ii
Very clear. I liked it. While I'm not an athlete, I've met some who were like that.
2/26/2006 c1 24Glowing Aura
Nice, I thinkyou described it nicely, even though I'm no athlete myself :-) Great job.
2/26/2006 c1 2B. Styles
I'm not the best judge of poetry (despite the only things still present on my account here)

But as someone who loves the whole "Thrill of victory" and "Will of the warrior" tone and imagery, I appreciate this poem on a deep level =)

Huzzah for FP@LJ =D

-B
2/25/2006 c1 14aaidenkae
*laughs* so many thoughts of my friends on the basketball team telling the tales of their injuries. but a very nice poem. thank you-kae

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