for Foolish Girl, Stupid Girl6/25/2006 c1 ShelM
Very well written, first of all. Intense stuff- but it could easily be symbolic for something that's not as... physically intense and more an emontional thing. I really like it. You have a wonderful use of language.
Very well written, first of all. Intense stuff- but it could easily be symbolic for something that's not as... physically intense and more an emontional thing. I really like it. You have a wonderful use of language.
6/23/2006 c1 
9Post Preemptive Pandora
Dark, suspenseful, jolting, horror congealing in the reader's mind as what's really happening sets in.
I like it, Habibi. :D
9Post Preemptive PandoraDark, suspenseful, jolting, horror congealing in the reader's mind as what's really happening sets in.
I like it, Habibi. :D
2/26/2006 c1 Giraffe 63
This is some pretty intense stuff going on here. Wow, I was uncomfortable just reading it, and in this case, that's not a bad thing. Good job.
This is some pretty intense stuff going on here. Wow, I was uncomfortable just reading it, and in this case, that's not a bad thing. Good job.