for Drowning in Cold and Mystery
4/6/2006 c1 9LaughingFreak
I loved it!
(this wasn't her...it was her friend Erin)
2/25/2006 c1 151Mireille Caelarily
Not bad to start. "Mope" is a childish word, you might consider changing it? Also, it seems a little contradictory to be talking about bright blue eyes when the person is "dark." Nice imagery. In my view, you have potential. Keep up the good work!