for Who needs Cheerios anyway4/6/2006 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
Simple yet modern... I love it! No complaints to the lack of capitalization... it adds to the ambience... awesome work!
Simple yet modern... I love it! No complaints to the lack of capitalization... it adds to the ambience... awesome work!
3/14/2006 c1 
14kit feral
Oh! "sweet milk" is such a pretty way to describe a kiss! And I love the part about the cereal being gone from the blue bowl... it's safe to say I love the whole thing. :P Works really well as a haiku and I love the title, too. Keep writing!
14kit feralOh! "sweet milk" is such a pretty way to describe a kiss! And I love the part about the cereal being gone from the blue bowl... it's safe to say I love the whole thing. :P Works really well as a haiku and I love the title, too. Keep writing!
2/26/2006 c1 6rif4ever
Interesting... I like it. :D I can't exactly write haikus very well, I wrote one about a turtle and ended it with:
herbivorous chap
Hahaha... I'm a loser. :D
Toodles!
6rif4everInteresting... I like it. :D I can't exactly write haikus very well, I wrote one about a turtle and ended it with:
herbivorous chap
Hahaha... I'm a loser. :D
Toodles!
2/26/2006 c1 5Drops of Jewpiter
wow. thnx for the xcessivly long reivew- it's nice to know that someone like my writing.great haiku btw- i was nvr good at writing them. ~dropsofjewpiter~
5Drops of Jewpiterwow. thnx for the xcessivly long reivew- it's nice to know that someone like my writing.great haiku btw- i was nvr good at writing them. ~dropsofjewpiter~