for Untitled4/7/2006 c1 Blank1379
Nice. And you're absolutely right: short and bittersweet. Very good. Sorry I don't have time for a longer review, but my folks'll be home any time now and my dad will want the computer.Namarie-Smeagol Fasir Kenobi
Nice. And you're absolutely right: short and bittersweet. Very good. Sorry I don't have time for a longer review, but my folks'll be home any time now and my dad will want the computer.Namarie-Smeagol Fasir Kenobi
3/8/2006 c1 
879Moondog Dozier
Excellent flow and tone. The voice speaks so much more than the words in this. Well done.
879Moondog DozierExcellent flow and tone. The voice speaks so much more than the words in this. Well done.
3/5/2006 c1 50fairEtales
THIS is amazing. Wow. I am in awe. I really really like this. Well said. thx for the review! good job!
50fairEtalesTHIS is amazing. Wow. I am in awe. I really really like this. Well said. thx for the review! good job!
3/3/2006 c1 21EnemyWithin
Very rythmic and perhaps even melodic. I could see this as a song, as well as a poem. Great imagery, and nice rhyming pattern.
21EnemyWithinVery rythmic and perhaps even melodic. I could see this as a song, as well as a poem. Great imagery, and nice rhyming pattern.
2/26/2006 c1 134emeraude-irlandais
hey there! *reviewing you back- plus, every good writer needs an ego boost! ^^* Non-cheesiness makes the poem work- as opposed to so many writers who throw together *dat* and *wit* and *ma boi*- geh. Despicable. But, you, you! *punches fist in air* CARRY ON! ^^`~Bella~`
134emeraude-irlandaishey there! *reviewing you back- plus, every good writer needs an ego boost! ^^* Non-cheesiness makes the poem work- as opposed to so many writers who throw together *dat* and *wit* and *ma boi*- geh. Despicable. But, you, you! *punches fist in air* CARRY ON! ^^`~Bella~`
2/26/2006 c1 6MAmbler
Beautful. I love the combination of sadness and hope, and the inconclusive conclusion (somethings wrong with that phrase, don't ask...).
6MAmblerBeautful. I love the combination of sadness and hope, and the inconclusive conclusion (somethings wrong with that phrase, don't ask...).
2/26/2006 c1 17sunday night sky
aww! this is a beautiful piece - the rhythm is perfect, it flows so well. i like the sadness in this, the angsty hopefullness. it works. great piece!
17sunday night skyaww! this is a beautiful piece - the rhythm is perfect, it flows so well. i like the sadness in this, the angsty hopefullness. it works. great piece!