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8/2/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
I like this a lot. You've written this really well. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^
3/8/2006 c1 2shannaro
beautful poem.
3/5/2006 c1 16The Melancholy Cocoa Bean
first of all, thanx alot for reviewing some of my work - i really take it to heart! i love this peice, its so slow moving and timid and dark. Your use of commas is very effective. keep up the good work :D
2/27/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
you expressed your emotions very well in this~ good work

keep writing!
2/27/2006 c1 124in theory
I love the tone you take on, it's so open ended and limitless.
2/26/2006 c1 16Cloudsinthesky
I liked your poem. It was good.
2/26/2006 c1 16Prisoner of Dreams
Great job! "My eyes searching but lack the sight" - I really like that line!

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