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81Princess-anna57
I like this a lot. You've written this really well. Keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57I like this a lot. You've written this really well. Keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^
3/5/2006 c1 16The Melancholy Cocoa Bean
first of all, thanx alot for reviewing some of my work - i really take it to heart! i love this peice, its so slow moving and timid and dark. Your use of commas is very effective. keep up the good work :D
16The Melancholy Cocoa Beanfirst of all, thanx alot for reviewing some of my work - i really take it to heart! i love this peice, its so slow moving and timid and dark. Your use of commas is very effective. keep up the good work :D
2/27/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
you expressed your emotions very well in this~ good work
keep writing!
132mizu no kokoroyou expressed your emotions very well in this~ good work
keep writing!
2/26/2006 c1 16Prisoner of Dreams
Great job! "My eyes searching but lack the sight" - I really like that line!
16Prisoner of DreamsGreat job! "My eyes searching but lack the sight" - I really like that line!