
3/25/2006 c1
612simpleplan13
Sad.. I love that ending I actaully expected her to do it anyway to make him happy.. nice job

Sad.. I love that ending I actaully expected her to do it anyway to make him happy.. nice job
3/3/2006 c1
241Werewolf Nighteyes
There's something annoying about the opening line, but that's just me. But the rest of the poem works out fine.

There's something annoying about the opening line, but that's just me. But the rest of the poem works out fine.