for The Moon Bride11/15/2006 c5 Aneedegorarose
I'm glad you updated but i had to reread the chapter before to catch up. I love this story
I'm glad you updated but i had to reread the chapter before to catch up. I love this story
11/12/2006 c5 
2Daidairo
You can't give up on romance! This is such a good story! ... Well, at least finish this before you stop! This fan will be waiting for the alerts, okay?
2DaidairoYou can't give up on romance! This is such a good story! ... Well, at least finish this before you stop! This fan will be waiting for the alerts, okay?
5/4/2006 c4 8Ajaz
This story is really interesting... I love Maggie's accent and I really like the plot... Keep going... And update...
8AjazThis story is really interesting... I love Maggie's accent and I really like the plot... Keep going... And update...
3/20/2006 c4 Aneedegorarose
YEH Two chapters in a row! Woot! Very kind of you and that was such a aww scene.. just great! All of it
YEH Two chapters in a row! Woot! Very kind of you and that was such a aww scene.. just great! All of it
3/20/2006 c3 Aneedegorarose
just fab! And it's moving quickly! Yay! Fast paced and I just love her she's so cool! But innocent at the same time it's just wonderful and original.. So good!
just fab! And it's moving quickly! Yay! Fast paced and I just love her she's so cool! But innocent at the same time it's just wonderful and original.. So good!
3/8/2006 c2 AneeDegoraRose
O I can't wait for more! I was trying to make the chapter last as long as it could and then "NO The end!" It came very quickly lol as I love the story and read it as quickly as I could while trying to make it last lol. Good Work, Keep it up!
O I can't wait for more! I was trying to make the chapter last as long as it could and then "NO The end!" It came very quickly lol as I love the story and read it as quickly as I could while trying to make it last lol. Good Work, Keep it up!
3/7/2006 c2 Quarantine
Okay, I like Annie, and this chapter, but at one point is was hard to keep Ricardo and the driver apart. And then there was Roberto. Did he just disappear?
Okay, I like Annie, and this chapter, but at one point is was hard to keep Ricardo and the driver apart. And then there was Roberto. Did he just disappear?
3/7/2006 c1 Quarantine
Well now, her dialect is a nice touch. However, if I remember correctly, Madame referrs to a married woman, and you've made the point very clear that Maggie is a Mademoiselle. Okay, next chapter!
Well now, her dialect is a nice touch. However, if I remember correctly, Madame referrs to a married woman, and you've made the point very clear that Maggie is a Mademoiselle. Okay, next chapter!
3/4/2006 c1 2Once upon a smile
Good, I love the way she talks.. Great characterisation(if I spelt it right)! lol can't wait to read more!
2Once upon a smileGood, I love the way she talks.. Great characterisation(if I spelt it right)! lol can't wait to read more!
3/2/2006 c1 Silent Force
I'm really liking the characters you've introduced, especially Magdalena. She certainly isn't your typical fantasy heroine. The plot you've introduced is also very promising. I do have one suggestion; maybe you could add some more description of where the whole scene is taking place, as I was a bit confused about that. Overall, however, it seems like it'll be an interesting story! I'll be looking forward to an update.
I'm really liking the characters you've introduced, especially Magdalena. She certainly isn't your typical fantasy heroine. The plot you've introduced is also very promising. I do have one suggestion; maybe you could add some more description of where the whole scene is taking place, as I was a bit confused about that. Overall, however, it seems like it'll be an interesting story! I'll be looking forward to an update.