6/18/2006 c1 10SoonToBeMe
hm... I like it but it kind of loses the rhythm at "that wouldn't shock me". I think there needs to be more words in that sentence (more syllables). You can never have too many bouncy short never-ending songs though... so good job

3/1/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
Xd this was amusing in a very good way~ almost like a chant~

keep writing!