
4/4/2006 c1 Benjamin - To Be Deleted
Great poem! At first it made me laugh... that does seem to be true doesn't it?... then the end was sad. To be able to switch my emotions around that fast is proof of talent. Keep it up!
Great poem! At first it made me laugh... that does seem to be true doesn't it?... then the end was sad. To be able to switch my emotions around that fast is proof of talent. Keep it up!
3/30/2006 c1
86Isis lives
Is this a true story? I really really like this, I can relate to it well having liked a guy for almost 2 years as well now (how weird is that? XD) but tiz really good poem. It's strange 'cause I feel almost exactly the same, it's like you crawled into my head there :D
Keep writing!
Isis x

Is this a true story? I really really like this, I can relate to it well having liked a guy for almost 2 years as well now (how weird is that? XD) but tiz really good poem. It's strange 'cause I feel almost exactly the same, it's like you crawled into my head there :D
Keep writing!
Isis x
3/27/2006 c1
67A Midsummer Nights Sacrifice
Emotions suck sometimes... *grumbles* i'm still in denile about having my crush... Good poem i think alot of people can relate to which is always good.

Emotions suck sometimes... *grumbles* i'm still in denile about having my crush... Good poem i think alot of people can relate to which is always good.
3/14/2006 c1
17Murder245
I know how you feel, about the liking him for so long. I didn't quite make it to 2 years, but it was pretty close...and I DID tell him. And we're still friends, actually...Anyway, good job, and keep writing.
~j.lynn
p.s. You're the only person who has me on their favorites list! Thanks!

I know how you feel, about the liking him for so long. I didn't quite make it to 2 years, but it was pretty close...and I DID tell him. And we're still friends, actually...Anyway, good job, and keep writing.
~j.lynn
p.s. You're the only person who has me on their favorites list! Thanks!
3/8/2006 c1
23Marjorie Swann
I know that situation. Your poem portrayed it really well-it's funny at times but also sad, just like you laugh about it, but at the same time it's really, REALLY hard.

I know that situation. Your poem portrayed it really well-it's funny at times but also sad, just like you laugh about it, but at the same time it's really, REALLY hard.
3/3/2006 c1
64not sure yet
boys suck, just shoot them all in the head
dont mind me, im not aggravated or anything, i swear...
anywaz, nice job

boys suck, just shoot them all in the head
dont mind me, im not aggravated or anything, i swear...
anywaz, nice job
3/2/2006 c1
6Count of Casualty
That was really good! The first part made me laugh, and the last part was sad. Great work over all! :)

That was really good! The first part made me laugh, and the last part was sad. Great work over all! :)