for Hurt Me3/15/2006 c1 
48chocohound
I loved this one! Especially "Wrap me up in the colours of your world" and "And slaughter my dreams." I like the tinge of irony at the end too.
48chocohoundI loved this one! Especially "Wrap me up in the colours of your world" and "And slaughter my dreams." I like the tinge of irony at the end too.
3/12/2006 c1 Ahemait
i really like how you have italics, bold, and underlined words in this. it gave it a certain flow or tone...something. i cant really describe what i mean. its good thouhg!
i really like how you have italics, bold, and underlined words in this. it gave it a certain flow or tone...something. i cant really describe what i mean. its good thouhg!
3/3/2006 c1 48Morcirith
i haven't read anything like this. very creative. i feel like i'm clinging to the last word of every line...about to fall
48Morcirithi haven't read anything like this. very creative. i feel like i'm clinging to the last word of every line...about to fall
3/3/2006 c1 dorydafish
WOW!
that is like the only word for it.
this was so cool that i could totally empathise with wat you are saying.
loved it - one of ur best poems i think and i like all your poems
see this is wat i mean wen i say that u are an amazing writer
WOW!
that is like the only word for it.
this was so cool that i could totally empathise with wat you are saying.
loved it - one of ur best poems i think and i like all your poems
see this is wat i mean wen i say that u are an amazing writer
3/2/2006 c1 Bellanyx
It's good but you should rely less on font styles to put the emphasis in your writing with a poem that is strong as it is. I do like o n e being spaced out, though.
It's good but you should rely less on font styles to put the emphasis in your writing with a poem that is strong as it is. I do like o n e being spaced out, though.
3/2/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
lol this is def. not what i thought it would be...or as the title led me to think! lol...very good!
lol this is def. not what i thought it would be...or as the title led me to think! lol...very good!