for ANGEL IN A DARK LIGHT7/3/2007 c1 
30Charmed.imsure-Always
it was as if you took these two different poems and put them together to creat a work of art, extremely unique! I loved it. Never stop writing!
30Charmed.imsure-Alwaysit was as if you took these two different poems and put them together to creat a work of art, extremely unique! I loved it. Never stop writing!
5/22/2006 c1 24frayedlifeforce
suspenseful - i liked the way you wrote this.written indepthly - very descriptive and some great imagery.
24frayedlifeforcesuspenseful - i liked the way you wrote this.written indepthly - very descriptive and some great imagery.
4/6/2006 c1 60Rosanna28
Awesome poem Alex, I love the last line! Finishes the poem perfectly.. Great job!
Much love, Rosanna.
P.S. we should talk soon! ^_^
60Rosanna28Awesome poem Alex, I love the last line! Finishes the poem perfectly.. Great job!
Much love, Rosanna.
P.S. we should talk soon! ^_^
3/30/2006 c1 breezy nostrils
reminds me of a werewolf chase. the suspense, and the eerieness of it. great diction in here. nice work.
reminds me of a werewolf chase. the suspense, and the eerieness of it. great diction in here. nice work.
3/14/2006 c1 51Kusje
This one spoke to me alot. I love the figurative meanings in this poem.
Very beautiful. Tragic, though.
I loved it.
-shinigamiku.
51KusjeThis one spoke to me alot. I love the figurative meanings in this poem.
Very beautiful. Tragic, though.
I loved it.
-shinigamiku.
3/7/2006 c1 28emilyrachel18
Alex this is amazing! So full of emotion so real. You are gonna have to tell me where this came from! Please contact me soon i'm really worried about you
28emilyrachel18Alex this is amazing! So full of emotion so real. You are gonna have to tell me where this came from! Please contact me soon i'm really worried about you
3/5/2006 c1 298Moon-Chaser
Beautiful. The whole thing was something that I could relate to and that just made it more powerful.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserBeautiful. The whole thing was something that I could relate to and that just made it more powerful.
Keep it up.
3/4/2006 c1 Ahemait
it was lonog, but i absolutely loved it. one of your better ones, in my opinion. i liked the lines with the bold letter, emphasizing (cant spell) certain part. awesome
it was lonog, but i absolutely loved it. one of your better ones, in my opinion. i liked the lines with the bold letter, emphasizing (cant spell) certain part. awesome
3/3/2006 c1 115HauntedMisery
This piece is beautiful.
"Her hands shivered from the unwanted touch as warmth cascaded through her emotionless body."
That is beautiful right there.
Keep writing!
115HauntedMiseryThis piece is beautiful.
"Her hands shivered from the unwanted touch as warmth cascaded through her emotionless body."
That is beautiful right there.
Keep writing!
3/3/2006 c1 dancingintherain
beautiful...
beautiful...
3/2/2006 c1 39Speaker For The Live
Impressive imagery throughout, I loved this piece. The line "He let her fall, with a sneer spread across his tainted lips." is amazing. The 2 lines directly before it, the punctuation confused me. It was either a typo or intentional, but either way I found it distracted more than added.
Also, I misread it for a minute and thought that it ended with "being". I felt like it was stronger that way than with the title repeated in the final line. "Angel in a Dark Light" is by far your weakest image in the peace, making it an ideal title, but not the strong ending the quality of the piece indicates is coming.
Overall though, bloody amazing, I loved the imagery throughout.
39Speaker For The LiveImpressive imagery throughout, I loved this piece. The line "He let her fall, with a sneer spread across his tainted lips." is amazing. The 2 lines directly before it, the punctuation confused me. It was either a typo or intentional, but either way I found it distracted more than added.
Also, I misread it for a minute and thought that it ended with "being". I felt like it was stronger that way than with the title repeated in the final line. "Angel in a Dark Light" is by far your weakest image in the peace, making it an ideal title, but not the strong ending the quality of the piece indicates is coming.
Overall though, bloody amazing, I loved the imagery throughout.