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6/23/2006 c1 24Lady Isabella De Luca
This was very well written! It had an intesity that drew me in, every word had such power...it really moved me.
3/2/2006 c1 31Cloak-of-Shadows
You are right... you suck at summaries. Great poem here. The story of a man who refuses to believe a relationship is truely over, and continues to try, even though he's brought back down again each time. The imagery is excellent in this poem. If I picked out parts of the poem like I usually do with other reviews, this review would turn into an essay. An absolutely great poem. I wish I had time to check out your other works... maybe I'll check tomorrow :P
3/2/2006 c1 48Vyvyan
So sad..but very well writen.
3/2/2006 c1 47Paper Bag Ghost
I love this line: His eyes and mouth bleeding

Through the staples and the stitches

I draw pictures with these things with their eyes, one eye, or mouth stitched. I love this poem!

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