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5/2/2006 c1 ode to a firefly
Very creative title. This was an interesting format for a poem. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like it before.

~Christine ^.^
3/21/2006 c1 50Katrina Gabrielle
everything I read is hyponotizing. It's like I'm there, and I love that. Confusing and yet perfectly clear because of the raw human emotion shown in your words. THIS is talent.
3/20/2006 c1 2saccharine lust aerial
um, wow. good. sort of mysterious.
3/18/2006 c1 13Nicole Michele
Wow, this capturing, it drew me in.

I really like the whole thig. The images did remind of a summer day.
3/18/2006 c1 27RosepetalDoll
okay im still saying it. all of your work is so gorgeous i am eaten to death with envy! and i like dear jaime too.
3/11/2006 c1 11les petits bateaux
Gorgeous. I loved the imagery of a warm sunny day, but the ending killed it with it's angst. No matter, it was brilliant altogether. :)
3/10/2006 c1 a lonely september
oh jesus christ. this was so fucking painful and it's been a little since i've read something this painful. it's so amazingly written, you're so mazing, but it's so fucking sad. : ( a million tears for you, darling.
3/3/2006 c1 63lackluster
i like how the undertones of this remind me of summer('sun baked', 'warm summer day',etc.). the message, otherwise, is evident. too evident, but that makes its point.
3/2/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow, the last two lines were great, really ended the poem off nicely~ good work

keep writing!

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