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for John

3/25/2006 c1 123Black and White Dreams
whoa. this is so powerful. i can tell u were really trying to get ur point accross when u wrote this. u got it accross! good job! i like the font, how u center some lines, underline, bold face, and italicize some words. g00d 4 u! keep writting! Love, Caitlin
3/9/2006 c1 2W3DNESDAY
i really like this, whatever it is. is it a poem, is it a story.. who knows. the structure is great. and it's refreshing to have sincere emotion expressed in such an articulate way. i also like how the bold, italics, and underlined words add to the forcefulness of the poem. i LOVED "You make me so angry. You make me cry, John." i mean, who can't relate to that? great work!
3/7/2006 c1 8Calmhorizon
I think it's good. Are you plan to write this as a proper story, because I think you should.

3/2/2006 c1 23iknowthethirdthingaboutpoetry
This is liked a bad failed poem posted as prose. Or the other way around.

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