for the new song of songs7/19/2007 c1 Her Wishing Well
Wow the imagery and description in this is god-damn amazing, just breath-taking.
Wow the imagery and description in this is god-damn amazing, just breath-taking.
3/26/2007 c1 recycle rhymes
that was the best extended metaphor ever...i love the anaology - so breathtaking and relatable.
that was the best extended metaphor ever...i love the anaology - so breathtaking and relatable.
7/23/2006 c1 
51rightclick5ave
i've never seen something this unique. my faves were the throat and eyes. everyone writes about eyes but your description was fantastic. not many write about throats and.. well. amazing. going into my faves. (:
51rightclick5avei've never seen something this unique. my faves were the throat and eyes. everyone writes about eyes but your description was fantastic. not many write about throats and.. well. amazing. going into my faves. (:
7/18/2006 c1 62ossining
Wow. This is super gorgeous and perfect. I would point out what I liked, but that would take forever, since I loved everything. The images, the way you use words, the metaphors...everything is divine. I am in love. I am favoriting this and you. Keep writing! :)
62ossiningWow. This is super gorgeous and perfect. I would point out what I liked, but that would take forever, since I loved everything. The images, the way you use words, the metaphors...everything is divine. I am in love. I am favoriting this and you. Keep writing! :)
4/8/2006 c1 34poet tree
oh god. fantastic, wonderful descriptions and the way you bold-ed the body part in question is fantastic. also the way you centered on things not usually considered "attractive" such as forearms. lovely.
34poet treeoh god. fantastic, wonderful descriptions and the way you bold-ed the body part in question is fantastic. also the way you centered on things not usually considered "attractive" such as forearms. lovely.
4/8/2006 c1 56felicia13
Ooh . . . powerfully descriptive. I love it! So glad I got a chance to read this one . . . I can't imagine what it's like read aloud . . . :shivers up and down spine: I really love it . . . An excellante job, and please continue!
Thanks for the review . . . A trend: people either love or hate the repitition. I think it's necesarry, but that's just my opinion . . .
all my love,felicia
56felicia13Ooh . . . powerfully descriptive. I love it! So glad I got a chance to read this one . . . I can't imagine what it's like read aloud . . . :shivers up and down spine: I really love it . . . An excellante job, and please continue!
Thanks for the review . . . A trend: people either love or hate the repitition. I think it's necesarry, but that's just my opinion . . .
all my love,felicia
3/27/2006 c1 75clockwork kiss
ah. i love the chest part! this is great work! the hair&eyes are also lovely. great vocabulary and no really repetative imagery. i love how it comes together to make the whole "song". very neat idea, great write.
75clockwork kissah. i love the chest part! this is great work! the hair&eyes are also lovely. great vocabulary and no really repetative imagery. i love how it comes together to make the whole "song". very neat idea, great write.
3/22/2006 c1 16moralofthestory
Hm...the impact of this is visceral. I like the use of punctuation as a catalyst for your words. I can certainly see this meant to be read aloud or as a Spoken Word piece. Excellent.
16moralofthestoryHm...the impact of this is visceral. I like the use of punctuation as a catalyst for your words. I can certainly see this meant to be read aloud or as a Spoken Word piece. Excellent.
3/8/2006 c1 101frigg
Absolutely lovely dahling, I've favorited this. If I had to pick a favorite stanza it would be 'chest'. Simply wondrous.
georgie (formally Junkd)
101friggAbsolutely lovely dahling, I've favorited this. If I had to pick a favorite stanza it would be 'chest'. Simply wondrous.
georgie (formally Junkd)
3/4/2006 c1 19Jason J. Ross
Wow! Very well-crafted. You have created a sculpture with words! Very creative.
19Jason J. RossWow! Very well-crafted. You have created a sculpture with words! Very creative.
3/3/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Fully descriptive. I like how you broke this down into parts and individual sections. It really makes the whole work more complete. Well done.
879Moondog DozierFully descriptive. I like how you broke this down into parts and individual sections. It really makes the whole work more complete. Well done.
3/2/2006 c1 24she's not breathing
ohmyGod. fucking wow. that was amazing. i can't say anything else. soso amazing. gack. i wish i could write like this - mindblowing. so mindblowing. it's going on my fav stories list () because it has to. hahh. wow.
~kait
24she's not breathingohmyGod. fucking wow. that was amazing. i can't say anything else. soso amazing. gack. i wish i could write like this - mindblowing. so mindblowing. it's going on my fav stories list () because it has to. hahh. wow.
~kait