Reviews: Innocent | FictionPress

9/30/2008 c1

73Rozlin
i don't really like the flow of this one... feels too choppy... seems you haven't added anything new in a while either... Do we all just grow out of it?

3/25/2006 c1

612simpleplan13
I'm not sure if I like this.. it's nicely written, but I feel like it needs more

3/3/2006 c1

81Princess-anna57
Nicely written, good work! Write on!

~Anna~

3/3/2006 c1

48Vyvyan
I like the sound of it, and the last two lines are brilliant. However, I would like more background information, such as what exactly they think she did and how/if she can prove she's innocent.

But for a short little section, it's beautiful.