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6/7/2008 c1 4Myrix
Its so cute! I love the way it explains itself and its just amazing! plz r/r my story!
7/27/2006 c1 5Ladiebug
You are a fantastic writer! That poem was amazing. No critiques, nothing.An honest to goodness great job.:)
5/16/2006 c1 234angelcloudsh
damn that was good!
3/11/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
i can relate to this, especially the line 'you have forgotten me'~ good work

keep writing!
3/9/2006 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
Yay! This made me happy, at first it was sad when he hardly even noticed you, but I loved the ending. I liked these lines alot "I see your face overcome with surprise.

And I know that your memories have

returned as I look into your eyes."Nice job, keep on writing.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.
3/4/2006 c1 review
hahahaha. talkin bout disappointments and coming back.

so sweet...
3/4/2006 c1 B34utifulDr34mer
real nice poem ree if i havent already said so.bet u werent expecting to hear from me, huh?
3/4/2006 c1 Herminia
This is very well written. I like the diction and the tone of this poem. Great job!
3/4/2006 c1 21Khiranna
Amazingly enough...this reminds me of a situation that I am currently in...Very good...well written...I await more works from you.
3/3/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
I agree, this could very much make a great story. Excellent job!
3/3/2006 c1 12Nakuru Ayaname
I love it. It's great. I think it would make a great story as well.

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