
6/7/2008 c1
4Myrix
Its so cute! I love the way it explains itself and its just amazing! plz r/r my story!

Its so cute! I love the way it explains itself and its just amazing! plz r/r my story!
7/27/2006 c1
5Ladiebug
You are a fantastic writer! That poem was amazing. No critiques, nothing.An honest to goodness great job.:)

You are a fantastic writer! That poem was amazing. No critiques, nothing.An honest to goodness great job.:)
3/11/2006 c1
132mizu no kokoro
i can relate to this, especially the line 'you have forgotten me'~ good work
keep writing!

i can relate to this, especially the line 'you have forgotten me'~ good work
keep writing!
3/9/2006 c1
197the Stranger in the moonlight
Yay! This made me happy, at first it was sad when he hardly even noticed you, but I loved the ending. I liked these lines alot "I see your face overcome with surprise.
And I know that your memories have
returned as I look into your eyes."Nice job, keep on writing.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.

Yay! This made me happy, at first it was sad when he hardly even noticed you, but I loved the ending. I liked these lines alot "I see your face overcome with surprise.
And I know that your memories have
returned as I look into your eyes."Nice job, keep on writing.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.
3/4/2006 c1 B34utifulDr34mer
real nice poem ree if i havent already said so.bet u werent expecting to hear from me, huh?
real nice poem ree if i havent already said so.bet u werent expecting to hear from me, huh?
3/4/2006 c1 Herminia
This is very well written. I like the diction and the tone of this poem. Great job!
This is very well written. I like the diction and the tone of this poem. Great job!