for GlitterGlass Desire6/5/2007 c1 
16Love to Laugh
This is temptation at its root. This poem is incredible because it encomapasses a feeling everyone has had at one time or another - the desire to rebel and fall for the excitment of evil rather than the predictability of good. I could completely envision this scene taking place, just wonderful! As I read through your stuff I keep getting more blown away with each one!
16Love to LaughThis is temptation at its root. This poem is incredible because it encomapasses a feeling everyone has had at one time or another - the desire to rebel and fall for the excitment of evil rather than the predictability of good. I could completely envision this scene taking place, just wonderful! As I read through your stuff I keep getting more blown away with each one!
3/28/2006 c1 74laughter at the funeral
"as we twist and twirl on tiptoes"...nice use of sound device...and nice erotic lines too...very clever of you...you did a good job...
truly yours...
74laughter at the funeral"as we twist and twirl on tiptoes"...nice use of sound device...and nice erotic lines too...very clever of you...you did a good job...
truly yours...
3/20/2006 c1 67Helpless-Dreamer01
...I am speechless. The description gives me a disturbing vivid picture of the mind. But i admit I do like it. You have a very good style in writing poems.
All the best in your next poems, Dani
67Helpless-Dreamer01...I am speechless. The description gives me a disturbing vivid picture of the mind. But i admit I do like it. You have a very good style in writing poems.
All the best in your next poems, Dani
3/10/2006 c1 8Ivi
Amazingly powerful and moving. The imagery is amazing, powerfull and breathtaking. but dont give up on love...the fucking tears lead to the best parts.
8IviAmazingly powerful and moving. The imagery is amazing, powerfull and breathtaking. but dont give up on love...the fucking tears lead to the best parts.
3/8/2006 c1 Atelophobia
If love hurts so much as that poem made me feel (the imagery, everything, is so beautiful), yes it's not worth it.
If love hurts so much as that poem made me feel (the imagery, everything, is so beautiful), yes it's not worth it.
3/4/2006 c1 29I resemble addiction
This is... grotesque. But beautiful. I love your imagery, and the lines
"as God condemned me for being a sinnereven though I spend every night on my knees"
and
"(you never gave me substanceand I always love the taste of sin)"
Definitly going in my favorites.
29I resemble addictionThis is... grotesque. But beautiful. I love your imagery, and the lines
"as God condemned me for being a sinnereven though I spend every night on my knees"
and
"(you never gave me substanceand I always love the taste of sin)"
Definitly going in my favorites.
3/4/2006 c1 238classic violet
This is remarkabley beautiful. Oh, I love it! This is so gorgeous! Keep writing!
& I kind of know how you feel about love. It does hurt. I hope you're going to be ok.
238classic violetThis is remarkabley beautiful. Oh, I love it! This is so gorgeous! Keep writing!
& I kind of know how you feel about love. It does hurt. I hope you're going to be ok.
3/4/2006 c1 79Ashes.to.Acid
Purely heartbreaking and tragic. As many say misery is a muse and you proved the theory correct. Love is definitely not as beautiful and perfect as fairy tales portray it as..
79Ashes.to.AcidPurely heartbreaking and tragic. As many say misery is a muse and you proved the theory correct. Love is definitely not as beautiful and perfect as fairy tales portray it as..
3/4/2006 c1 134emeraude-irlandais
So..filled...with pain and gritty acceptance of just how painful everything can be, if there is an abundance. Almost made me cry- actually, a very difficult thing to do. Desperately good, best poetry I've read all week- it's all about the feeling.`~Bella~`
134emeraude-irlandaisSo..filled...with pain and gritty acceptance of just how painful everything can be, if there is an abundance. Almost made me cry- actually, a very difficult thing to do. Desperately good, best poetry I've read all week- it's all about the feeling.`~Bella~`