for Dignity Scraps3/15/2007 c1 
88Icthoid Matro Coselos
forget I ever said your work was good... this is beyond good. omgosh, can i print this out and stick it on my wall-seriously? I know all too well what this says, and i couldn't write the first words of a poem to finally plaster my heart to the paper like this... just, wow. wow...wow.
88Icthoid Matro Coselosforget I ever said your work was good... this is beyond good. omgosh, can i print this out and stick it on my wall-seriously? I know all too well what this says, and i couldn't write the first words of a poem to finally plaster my heart to the paper like this... just, wow. wow...wow.
4/27/2006 c1 12deadlyperfection
o! *claps* I'm so glad you're backk! Actually, we're IMing right now. Anyways- to the poem. The brilliant, amazing, wonderfully wonderful poem!
First, let me say that I loved the last stanza. Especially the 1st two lines of it "All the expectations I can never live up to / And all the temptations I always give up to"
I also really liked the first two lines "Here's a blank sheet for all I've done to me / Here's my last pride - my apologies" I don't know why, but it was a really good opening for the poem. It really showed how much a poem can convey or mean.
Truly great, as always :)
12deadlyperfectiono! *claps* I'm so glad you're backk! Actually, we're IMing right now. Anyways- to the poem. The brilliant, amazing, wonderfully wonderful poem!
First, let me say that I loved the last stanza. Especially the 1st two lines of it "All the expectations I can never live up to / And all the temptations I always give up to"
I also really liked the first two lines "Here's a blank sheet for all I've done to me / Here's my last pride - my apologies" I don't know why, but it was a really good opening for the poem. It really showed how much a poem can convey or mean.
Truly great, as always :)
4/11/2006 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
YAY! You're back, leila! welcome back! (i missed you lots!) and, not a moment too soon either. i'm leaving FP soon. well, sry i didn't review earlier. i was busy and forgot. anywho, yay! your back! and, as always, up to your wonderful masterpieces. hmm, i LOVED this piece. but, where shall i start? "for all that you've done, nothing to defend/i'm sorry for thinking you were ever my friend" those lines stuck out to me the most. probably because of all my problems with friendship i've had lately. they sort of just echo in my head, i guess. so, great job on that. and, i hope i can help you through this leila. i hope everythings alright again soon! i miss ya so much and can't wait to see ya soon! Keep writing forever and always! lotsa luv!
LUV ALWAYS,~Davida
YAY! You're back, leila! welcome back! (i missed you lots!) and, not a moment too soon either. i'm leaving FP soon. well, sry i didn't review earlier. i was busy and forgot. anywho, yay! your back! and, as always, up to your wonderful masterpieces. hmm, i LOVED this piece. but, where shall i start? "for all that you've done, nothing to defend/i'm sorry for thinking you were ever my friend" those lines stuck out to me the most. probably because of all my problems with friendship i've had lately. they sort of just echo in my head, i guess. so, great job on that. and, i hope i can help you through this leila. i hope everythings alright again soon! i miss ya so much and can't wait to see ya soon! Keep writing forever and always! lotsa luv!
LUV ALWAYS,~Davida
3/26/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
I like the anger in this.. it's cool.. ncie rhmying too & btw a belated welcome back (im so behind on reviews!)
612simpleplan13I like the anger in this.. it's cool.. ncie rhmying too & btw a belated welcome back (im so behind on reviews!)
3/20/2006 c1 8JessiCullen
Were all my stories really that bad that non of them made your favorites list? Anyways, no big deal I put no thought into them *smiles* Anywho...
8JessiCullenWere all my stories really that bad that non of them made your favorites list? Anyways, no big deal I put no thought into them *smiles* Anywho...
3/14/2006 c1 19Rhea Valente
Wow.
Incredible writing - i can feel the emotions spilling out.
I loved how it ended - the last line "cause i die everyday" very powerful stuff. me likies muchlies. ^_^
~wolfeh (13.47)
19Rhea ValenteWow.
Incredible writing - i can feel the emotions spilling out.
I loved how it ended - the last line "cause i die everyday" very powerful stuff. me likies muchlies. ^_^
~wolfeh (13.47)
3/9/2006 c1 7Silva the silver shadow
I love how you expressed the emotion in your poem. It expressed that feeling perfectly.
7Silva the silver shadowI love how you expressed the emotion in your poem. It expressed that feeling perfectly.
3/5/2006 c1 298Moon-Chaser
I love the strong emotions and right now I can relate to what you are saying right now. Really you have perfect timing.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserI love the strong emotions and right now I can relate to what you are saying right now. Really you have perfect timing.
Keep it up.
3/4/2006 c1 63silentscreamer07
Leila! You're back? wow! hey! It's been so long! *waves hi frantically*
wow...you def. havent lost your talent of writing..(i knew you wouldnt :D What you've got is impossible to lose)
I don't know what exactly to say about this, because I want to say I know who you're talking about, but then again, I could be wrong. So this review, shall be in what I think it's about okay? *smiles*
First of all...BIG HUGE HUG! I wish there was so much more I could do...but the best I can offer at the moment is a big air hug, and my assurance to you that you can always talk to me, I know I tell you that all the time, but, really, please, talk to me. I'm always here, and I could relate to this poem soo soo much. You're thoughts in this poem, are the same as mine. Thoughts I have day in and day out. So, once again, i assure you, you CAN ALWAYS TALK TO ME! (lol...did i make that clear enuff? hehe)
You wrote so beautifully though, i can feel you're hurt, and your pain, and your agony all in this poem...Man, there is just a million things I could say, but of course, I can't think of any of them, and I don't want to put you to sleep. This was beautiful though, and so sad, it made me cry..(i hate admitting those kinds of things, but i'll be honest, it did.)
Talk to me whenever you need someone to rant to. Talk to me whenever you just want to get your mind off of whatever it is you're thinking about okay? I love you more then anything. AND I MISS YOU SO MUCH! AHH! But! I'll be seeing you soon! yay! (hope thats a good thing anyways..lol) Hope to hear from ya soon. Bye! *hugs*
~Britney~
63silentscreamer07Leila! You're back? wow! hey! It's been so long! *waves hi frantically*
wow...you def. havent lost your talent of writing..(i knew you wouldnt :D What you've got is impossible to lose)
I don't know what exactly to say about this, because I want to say I know who you're talking about, but then again, I could be wrong. So this review, shall be in what I think it's about okay? *smiles*
First of all...BIG HUGE HUG! I wish there was so much more I could do...but the best I can offer at the moment is a big air hug, and my assurance to you that you can always talk to me, I know I tell you that all the time, but, really, please, talk to me. I'm always here, and I could relate to this poem soo soo much. You're thoughts in this poem, are the same as mine. Thoughts I have day in and day out. So, once again, i assure you, you CAN ALWAYS TALK TO ME! (lol...did i make that clear enuff? hehe)
You wrote so beautifully though, i can feel you're hurt, and your pain, and your agony all in this poem...Man, there is just a million things I could say, but of course, I can't think of any of them, and I don't want to put you to sleep. This was beautiful though, and so sad, it made me cry..(i hate admitting those kinds of things, but i'll be honest, it did.)
Talk to me whenever you need someone to rant to. Talk to me whenever you just want to get your mind off of whatever it is you're thinking about okay? I love you more then anything. AND I MISS YOU SO MUCH! AHH! But! I'll be seeing you soon! yay! (hope thats a good thing anyways..lol) Hope to hear from ya soon. Bye! *hugs*
~Britney~
3/4/2006 c1 1Shiba-.-Sempai
*Bustles over, bringing hot cocoa and popcorn (The cure for anything Life chucks violently at you.* I'm getting the strong urge to hug you right about now. I have (sadly) been made aware of the fact that hugs don't make the monsters go away and everything turn out okay, but I still hold fast to the idea that they help at least at little. So here's a cyber-hug. *Holds out small wrapped package bearing the brightly-colored label "CyberHugs! Affection and comfort delivered directly into your Inbox! (Manufacturers not responsible for any damage to person or items that may occur when product is in use. Side effects may include, but are not limited to, difficulty breathing, slightly bruised ribs, and a feeling of intense annoyance directed at the sender. Do not operate heavy machinery while receiving our product, as generally such devices require an operator with the ability to breathe properly.) If there's anything I can do to help, you know where to find me! Anyway, on to the issue these reviews are actually meant for! REVEIWING! *Dramatic music* It so brilliantly , although slightly more guilt-ridden than usual. (I can totally see you staring at the screen in disgusted disbelief and saying "Well, Duh..." I really liked how you did the second stanza, for reasons slightly muddled (to me). It just seems to resonate the most with what you're trying to convey in this poem. I especially like how you made allmyfault one word - it seems to make it a concept of blame, as opposed to a description. I also adore your title -very fitting for the subject matter, I believe.
Manymany hugs,GreatGramma
1Shiba-.-Sempai*Bustles over, bringing hot cocoa and popcorn (The cure for anything Life chucks violently at you.* I'm getting the strong urge to hug you right about now. I have (sadly) been made aware of the fact that hugs don't make the monsters go away and everything turn out okay, but I still hold fast to the idea that they help at least at little. So here's a cyber-hug. *Holds out small wrapped package bearing the brightly-colored label "CyberHugs! Affection and comfort delivered directly into your Inbox! (Manufacturers not responsible for any damage to person or items that may occur when product is in use. Side effects may include, but are not limited to, difficulty breathing, slightly bruised ribs, and a feeling of intense annoyance directed at the sender. Do not operate heavy machinery while receiving our product, as generally such devices require an operator with the ability to breathe properly.) If there's anything I can do to help, you know where to find me! Anyway, on to the issue these reviews are actually meant for! REVEIWING! *Dramatic music* It so brilliantly , although slightly more guilt-ridden than usual. (I can totally see you staring at the screen in disgusted disbelief and saying "Well, Duh..." I really liked how you did the second stanza, for reasons slightly muddled (to me). It just seems to resonate the most with what you're trying to convey in this poem. I especially like how you made allmyfault one word - it seems to make it a concept of blame, as opposed to a description. I also adore your title -very fitting for the subject matter, I believe.
Manymany hugs,GreatGramma