for Poetic Prideland2/5/2007 c1 
829Anaare
A beautiful visualization of poetry, simply breathtaking. Almost melancholy imagery makes this a beautiful poem. I commend you and thank you for all the reviews. Truly appreciated.
829AnaareA beautiful visualization of poetry, simply breathtaking. Almost melancholy imagery makes this a beautiful poem. I commend you and thank you for all the reviews. Truly appreciated.
2/3/2007 c3 6Nobody-n-Particular
Really like the nature motif, and the fierce presence of green and beauty.
6Nobody-n-ParticularReally like the nature motif, and the fierce presence of green and beauty.
1/29/2007 c3 66WonderWing
Loved these poems, so simple and understanding. No time is wasted with erroneous details as you deliver the reader directly to the attached emotion. Really vivid :D
66WonderWingLoved these poems, so simple and understanding. No time is wasted with erroneous details as you deliver the reader directly to the attached emotion. Really vivid :D
5/23/2006 c2 879Moondog Dozier
"a new step, twice forward", is marvelous phrase work. I like the use of "Moon vanishes", as I am partial to the moon, and it creates a sense of mystery in this work. Last line really gives this a great conclusion. Good work.
879Moondog Dozier"a new step, twice forward", is marvelous phrase work. I like the use of "Moon vanishes", as I am partial to the moon, and it creates a sense of mystery in this work. Last line really gives this a great conclusion. Good work.
5/23/2006 c1 Moondog Dozier
I like the title and its use in the work. The interesting semi- contradiction of "For it belongs to us-but does not-because we are it and it is us", works so well to capture the situation. Excellent.
I like the title and its use in the work. The interesting semi- contradiction of "For it belongs to us-but does not-because we are it and it is us", works so well to capture the situation. Excellent.
3/9/2006 c2 131theory of black
I like this one too. It reminds me of Rainer Maria Rilke's works. (Thats a good thing)
131theory of blackI like this one too. It reminds me of Rainer Maria Rilke's works. (Thats a good thing)
3/9/2006 c1 theory of black
I like the formatting style. And... I take it you wear glasses? *high five*
I like the formatting style. And... I take it you wear glasses? *high five*
3/4/2006 c1 5Drops of Jewpiter
great poem. i love the first line 'this poetic prideland' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~
5Drops of Jewpitergreat poem. i love the first line 'this poetic prideland' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~