for The Danger in Loving7/1/2006 c1 
33WyrdWolf
Prepare for an inbox flood, my vixen!
Wow, that must have really inspired you. This was a good poem-I especially like the part near the middle about the cold and the thickest blankets cannot restore the heat. That was totally awesome. Sweet!
33WyrdWolfPrepare for an inbox flood, my vixen!
Wow, that must have really inspired you. This was a good poem-I especially like the part near the middle about the cold and the thickest blankets cannot restore the heat. That was totally awesome. Sweet!
3/14/2006 c1 57empathic life
I bow to your almight poem-writing-power. *bowbowbow* We mere mortals are unworthy to witness such skill. Yes. Well. Very good poem. Romeo and Juliet'll do that to you. Nice ending. Very powerful. Don't get too good, Felicia darling, or people'll only read your work and not the rest of ours!
57empathic lifeI bow to your almight poem-writing-power. *bowbowbow* We mere mortals are unworthy to witness such skill. Yes. Well. Very good poem. Romeo and Juliet'll do that to you. Nice ending. Very powerful. Don't get too good, Felicia darling, or people'll only read your work and not the rest of ours!
3/6/2006 c1 124in theory
Mm I'm loving your formatting/style approach, it's so...different. Fresh.
(and your bio made me giggle)
124in theoryMm I'm loving your formatting/style approach, it's so...different. Fresh.
(and your bio made me giggle)
3/5/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Wonderful movement and flow. It rushes on with the short line length. "only to feel that first kiss-one-last-time", is a marvelous, if not tragically appropriate ending.
879Moondog DozierWonderful movement and flow. It rushes on with the short line length. "only to feel that first kiss-one-last-time", is a marvelous, if not tragically appropriate ending.
3/5/2006 c1 20sloppy firsts
I love how you ended it so tragically, but that's the way it's suppose to be. Romeo and Juliet is quite an inspiration to poets everywhere. I actually think i wrote a piece myself after watching it. Beautiful poem as always
s2 chaos
20sloppy firstsI love how you ended it so tragically, but that's the way it's suppose to be. Romeo and Juliet is quite an inspiration to poets everywhere. I actually think i wrote a piece myself after watching it. Beautiful poem as always
s2 chaos