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7/4/2006 c9 5Skeptic-Critic
Ah...There's the whole bit about paling in comparison or something...I don't quite remember how that goes...That and the fact that I keep mispelling every other word...
7/4/2006 c8 Skeptic-Critic
Heh heh heh...Poor Luke...Cursed with good looks and...well...not much common sense apparently...
7/4/2006 c7 Skeptic-Critic
Wow...Somehow, even though this is written down, and even though everyone pretty much talks as fast as you read, I still couldn't help but feel she was talking really fast...That nervous, kinda chattery thing, you know? Yeah...that...
7/4/2006 c6 Skeptic-Critic
And jealousy rears it's head...But who's jealousy will get the best of them first? It's a race...Buahahahahaha! Crazy, sleep deprived teen coming through...
7/4/2006 c5 Skeptic-Critic
I LOVE PRIDE AND PREJUDICE!

Ok well I don't think that was even this chapter but I forgot to say it before and I just felt like telling you...Jane Austen...The start of the romantic cliches...Sense and Sensibility...Emma (the falling for your best friend cliche, in case you didn't know), Pride and Prejudice...Which I'm sure you probably know...Right...

I like Victoria...Anyone who loves book can be my friend...Just as long as it's a good selection...Not just sci fi or non fic...
7/4/2006 c4 Skeptic-Critic
Wow...He got rather poetic there when Madison came into the room...

She left the room? Boyfriend or no boyfriend, I woulda stuck around just to flirt with him...But that's me...And boyfriend is not something I'm going to have anytime soon...One guy? Not for me...
7/4/2006 c3 Skeptic-Critic
Wow...I'm with her...I think...He confused me so much that I'm confused about whether she was confused or if I'm simply confused...Right...Okay, let's just ignore all of these next few reviews...I cannot be held accountable for reviews that I leave after two in the morning...aka these next few...
7/4/2006 c2 Skeptic-Critic
Have I mentioned that I love "10 Things I Hate About You"? I've got to say...Stories take on whole different meanings and whatnot depending on what music you're listening to or what movie you're watching while you read...
7/4/2006 c1 Skeptic-Critic
Alright, so this has been under my 'to read' list for who knows how many updates and I finally got the chance to read it so here I am...

Ok, so truthfully, you had the word 'bet' in your summary...You could've put anything in the summary and just stuck the word 'bet' in there, and I'd read this...I love reading about bets...don't know why, but I do...

And I like Madison...she's not the usual airhead-ish girl with the protective best friend...actually, she kinda reminds me of Kat from "10 Things I Hate About You"...I'm not sure why, but she kinda does...
7/3/2006 c13 mo
:( i don't like how that ended, and what you talking about, i have seen stories with grammar mistakes, yours was just great! Though, i keep feeling sorry for victoria, really she needs to feel more confident about herself, luke better do that! also oh oh update soon, hopefully with luke's pov on what just happened.
7/2/2006 c12 justanotherdeadaccount
This story is pure genius, I'm surprised it hasn't got even more reviews!

The characters are lovable in their own ways, even though Madison comes off as pretentious. I think the interactions between the characters are real and beautiful in their own way.

I truly envy your wit.
7/2/2006 c12 mo
haha funny stuff! love how they conversed on the phone, so cute how they sounded so comfortable with eachother. update soon!
7/1/2006 c11 46Lavender L. C
Great dialogue.
7/1/2006 c12 carma627
awesome chapter! you updated fast! this was a really good chapter and for lack of anything intelligent to say um keep up the good work!
6/13/2006 c11 2cbprice25
"Enough was finally enough."

I guess we'll see.
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