4/7/2006 c1 Blank1379
Nice. Like I've probably said before, I'm not a big fan of love poetry, but this is short and sweet and I liked it."Our star." So I'm not the only one who puts personal inside jokes/memories into their stuff. :) It's nice to know. It's sometimes so easy to scan over that stuff, dismiss it as something you're not supposed to understnad. But it's more fun to wonder . . . Good job, mellon nin-Smeagol Fasir Kenobi

3/14/2006 c1 nofaceme
"When my heart breaks, will I feel it?"that was a great line. I liked this..I really loved the first line two. It just works. And yes, I miss the rain.keep it up.

3/8/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This has a wonderful motion and continuation of emotion. I like the flow, it enhances the feeling well. Good write.

3/6/2006 c1 40Ice Dagger
I love this. The rhyme scheme is a bit choppy, but not so choppy that it distracts from the beautiful descriptions that you paint with these gorgeous words. Well written!

3/5/2006 c1 4K. T. Marie
O, very pretty, i like the first few stanzas, but you right, the flow seems a little off at the end. but it is very pretty.~K.T.