for Two toned Lilac5/18/2007 c1 Nisi
You should finish the stories that you start dammit! . BTW when did Arca become your charry? ... Never mind... *sigh* I AM NOT WHIPPED! . GET THAT RIGHT DAMN YOU! I'm just a wolf cub madly in love with a tanuki goddess. These things happen you know
You should finish the stories that you start dammit! . BTW when did Arca become your charry? ... Never mind... *sigh* I AM NOT WHIPPED! . GET THAT RIGHT DAMN YOU! I'm just a wolf cub madly in love with a tanuki goddess. These things happen you know
3/10/2006 c1 reading writer
personally, in my opinion, i believe she has every right to post such a strong claimer. you cant underestimate the rate at which people will steal things; it happened to my friend just a few months ago. in any case, on to the actual review. at the very least, i have to say that im interested in this story. i dont know, but for some reason the whole -damsel in distress- bit is really captivating to me. maybe i just watch too much romantic movies.. ah well. and - not to sound like an air head reviewer - but id love to see more of this soon. i cant wait to see more of Arca. honestly, hes really something else..
personally, in my opinion, i believe she has every right to post such a strong claimer. you cant underestimate the rate at which people will steal things; it happened to my friend just a few months ago. in any case, on to the actual review. at the very least, i have to say that im interested in this story. i dont know, but for some reason the whole -damsel in distress- bit is really captivating to me. maybe i just watch too much romantic movies.. ah well. and - not to sound like an air head reviewer - but id love to see more of this soon. i cant wait to see more of Arca. honestly, hes really something else..
3/6/2006 c1 nolongerauser
Your "I own this" note at the beginning of the chapter was weird.
"...so no stealy or else I'll have to come to you (YES, /YOU/) house and kills you and your mommy and daddy (I gots me some connections...). and as soon as I get my license to kill, you'll be one of the many lucky people I get to maim in the most painful way, it will follow you down into the depths of the bowels of hell, and haunt you forever with no chance of escape-and I tend not to show any mercy..."
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU? DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW MANY PEOPLE WILL GO TO READ YOUR STORY, AND YOU WILL PUT THEM OFF IMMEDIATELY?
Please, if you want people to read your stories, use more tasteful claimers in future.
Your "I own this" note at the beginning of the chapter was weird.
"...so no stealy or else I'll have to come to you (YES, /YOU/) house and kills you and your mommy and daddy (I gots me some connections...). and as soon as I get my license to kill, you'll be one of the many lucky people I get to maim in the most painful way, it will follow you down into the depths of the bowels of hell, and haunt you forever with no chance of escape-and I tend not to show any mercy..."
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU? DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW MANY PEOPLE WILL GO TO READ YOUR STORY, AND YOU WILL PUT THEM OFF IMMEDIATELY?
Please, if you want people to read your stories, use more tasteful claimers in future.