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1/4/2008 c1 Julius Gillian
This is a very generous, and very human poem.

I felt it, in all its succinct beauty.

Excellent.
11/16/2006 c1 71Basnirka amaterka
Original, and very strong message in between the lines, even though straightforward at the first sight. Leaves a lot of space for the reader to let the fantasy work. With respect, b a
7/20/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
The conversational tone works well in this. Very relatable, and sincere. Well written.
7/17/2006 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I like how this is captured between two friends rather than say, a boy and a girl (not necessarily)

kind of leaning our place in society as we grow older; we are not always wanted where we want to be. I'm glad to see you writing again; we all need a break from this crazy writing world of fictionpress every once in a while. I'm glad to see your back though.

Juliet.
7/16/2006 c1 169MallowsWins
Says a lot in very little words. Very sad, but I like it. I've been there.

Daze
7/14/2006 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
How terribly sad. "Replys" should be "replies," but that was the only typo. Short, but packs a punch. Keep writing! :)
3/19/2006 c1 25cornered.sensations
yes, very sad, has happened to me too

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