for reflection4/18/2006 c1 lyricalprose
I have always admired your way of writing. The inner ability you have in expression still leaves me breathing breathless. You're my favorite artist
I have always admired your way of writing. The inner ability you have in expression still leaves me breathing breathless. You're my favorite artist
3/11/2006 c1 
61the.pink.life
Favorite line: "I'd drink myself into oblivion again if you said you'd meet me there." Oh, that is so perfect and aching. Just love it. Keep writing! :)
61the.pink.lifeFavorite line: "I'd drink myself into oblivion again if you said you'd meet me there." Oh, that is so perfect and aching. Just love it. Keep writing! :)
3/9/2006 c1 the naked civil servant
I’ve hair sprayed my wild side behind my ears and the textbook
Almost
marks out my innocence as the lone teen angel
oh, beautiful, just beautiful. the first few lines completely capture that day after surrealness & the last line... such wonderfully desperate affectation
I’ve hair sprayed my wild side behind my ears and the textbook
Almost
marks out my innocence as the lone teen angel
oh, beautiful, just beautiful. the first few lines completely capture that day after surrealness & the last line... such wonderfully desperate affectation
3/8/2006 c1 194Aslan Israel
I get so many pictures from this...m... but I really love the image of the bus. Makes me think of runaways... nowhere to go..nothing to loose.
Brava.
194Aslan IsraelI get so many pictures from this...m... but I really love the image of the bus. Makes me think of runaways... nowhere to go..nothing to loose.
Brava.
3/6/2006 c1 myno
ach, I love the last line.
ach, I love the last line.