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10/18/2006 c1 89write25
You raise many interesting questions in this piece, and given that you were 13 at the time, this is pretty deep (that's not really the work I'm looking for, but Deep will do for now). I was a little distracted by the...liberty you took with the english language (u, fallin).

I'd love to see what would happen if you rewrote this now, because let me say...when I was 13 I had just fallen for a boy who was taken (but i didn't care, and neither did he) and by the time I was 14 I knew I didn't love him. 16 now, I've told one girl that i love her (a mistake) and one boy that i love him (not sure if it's a mistake). Love is complicated, every day I try to figure out what it really means.

Never stop questioning love (this poem is a perfect form of question). When you stop questioning it, it gets boring.

~Mariah (by the way, I've got a poem called "love is" you might want to check out)

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