
3/22/2006 c1
14method acting
What an interesting last stanza. I understand completely in a way I am unable to convey to you, I'm sure. Just know that that part in particular was lovely. I love the repitition, it really helps the flow here. Your style reminds me of a friend of mine, Voyager, you should check her out. Anyways, it's just very relateable, to me and to others I'm sure. Fine job.

What an interesting last stanza. I understand completely in a way I am unable to convey to you, I'm sure. Just know that that part in particular was lovely. I love the repitition, it really helps the flow here. Your style reminds me of a friend of mine, Voyager, you should check her out. Anyways, it's just very relateable, to me and to others I'm sure. Fine job.