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1/24/2011 c1 368EWindheim
*whistles* Holy *! This made me shudder. Damn girl! Talk about dark and edgy! I like the idea of picking the bits of her soul off the bed. Well written imagery in that. I would like to see you make the last fee stanzas a bit more poetic, but that's just me ;)

Well done!

~Steel Winged Angel
4/3/2006 c1 32Veronika
Wow. This reminds me of one of my works, "Him", and not in a bad way. I was rather proud of that, just as I am very impressed with this. I love abuse stories/poems, they're so real. I also like the anger built up toward the end. Very well played-out, good job!
3/22/2006 c1 14method acting
I'm hoping this is fiction. Very well written, obviously. Horrible, obviously. But well done, though I hate this topic. I never read these pices regularly, simply because I'm so imposed. But you writing style intrguies me, and I wanted to see why you had no reviews. I am confused now, why shouldn't you? Maybe just lack of reviewing other peoples and getting yourself known, but you definatly oew it to yourself to get some feedback. Excellent job.

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