for Sexy1/24/2011 c1 
368EWindheim
*whistles* Holy *! This made me shudder. Damn girl! Talk about dark and edgy! I like the idea of picking the bits of her soul off the bed. Well written imagery in that. I would like to see you make the last fee stanzas a bit more poetic, but that's just me ;)
Well done!
~Steel Winged Angel
368EWindheim*whistles* Holy *! This made me shudder. Damn girl! Talk about dark and edgy! I like the idea of picking the bits of her soul off the bed. Well written imagery in that. I would like to see you make the last fee stanzas a bit more poetic, but that's just me ;)
Well done!
~Steel Winged Angel
4/3/2006 c1 32Veronika
Wow. This reminds me of one of my works, "Him", and not in a bad way. I was rather proud of that, just as I am very impressed with this. I love abuse stories/poems, they're so real. I also like the anger built up toward the end. Very well played-out, good job!
32VeronikaWow. This reminds me of one of my works, "Him", and not in a bad way. I was rather proud of that, just as I am very impressed with this. I love abuse stories/poems, they're so real. I also like the anger built up toward the end. Very well played-out, good job!
3/22/2006 c1 14method acting
I'm hoping this is fiction. Very well written, obviously. Horrible, obviously. But well done, though I hate this topic. I never read these pices regularly, simply because I'm so imposed. But you writing style intrguies me, and I wanted to see why you had no reviews. I am confused now, why shouldn't you? Maybe just lack of reviewing other peoples and getting yourself known, but you definatly oew it to yourself to get some feedback. Excellent job.
14method actingI'm hoping this is fiction. Very well written, obviously. Horrible, obviously. But well done, though I hate this topic. I never read these pices regularly, simply because I'm so imposed. But you writing style intrguies me, and I wanted to see why you had no reviews. I am confused now, why shouldn't you? Maybe just lack of reviewing other peoples and getting yourself known, but you definatly oew it to yourself to get some feedback. Excellent job.