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1/27/2007 c1 52meaninglessTears
heh heh nice rhyming. i liked the line that was:

"So don't forget

To use protection

'Cause pregnant girls

Can't stand rejection"

nice job!
3/27/2006 c1 67A Midsummer Nights Sacrifice
Good poem thank you for writing the perfect advertisement for ant drug abuse and the sopport of safe and responsible sex.

You body is a temple don't desecrate it for fun!
3/22/2006 c1 90Dragonzz
WOW! I LOVE THIS POEM! I love the way it flows and how the words go together, and it is slightly humorous, yet not at the same time. IT'S AWESOME

~dragonzz~
3/17/2006 c1 48iwillshine
haha that was great! specially the ugly trool that was wonderfull!(11)
3/9/2006 c1 2W3DNESDAY
i loved "So don't forget

To use protection

'Cause pregnant girls

Can't stand rejection"

great work!
3/8/2006 c1 69pantheratigrissumatrae
I liked it. It flowed very nicely... And the meaning just was like "Boop! Im here..." Keep writing!
3/8/2006 c1 crazy dog events
The way you format it makes it feel stunted. Remember, rhymes can still be evident even when they're not end rhymes. I'd combine every two lines.

nice job though. excellent point.

-pictographic.love

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