for Strawberry Jam4/27/2008 c1 
24Mistress of Eternity
Sticky, icky jam. I love the varied repetitions - and the stench of jam is overpowering.
(Your profile says like Jacqueline Carey? What did you think of the last 2 books, if you've read them that is...?)
-Anna
24Mistress of EternitySticky, icky jam. I love the varied repetitions - and the stench of jam is overpowering.
(Your profile says like Jacqueline Carey? What did you think of the last 2 books, if you've read them that is...?)
-Anna
7/19/2007 c1 109mistressKC
Wow, that was certainly unique. I loved your descriptions. I don't think I've ever seen strawberry jam in such a manner
109mistressKCWow, that was certainly unique. I loved your descriptions. I don't think I've ever seen strawberry jam in such a manner
5/2/2007 c1 10DarkBlysse
Whoa...deep. Though I think 'kaleidoscopic' sounds odd, and just 'kaleidoscope flavours' would sound a little better.
Great work! ^_^
10DarkBlysseWhoa...deep. Though I think 'kaleidoscopic' sounds odd, and just 'kaleidoscope flavours' would sound a little better.
Great work! ^_^
7/13/2006 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Nice theme of strawberry jam - its multiple meanings are expressed quite well.
6Nobody-n-ParticularNice theme of strawberry jam - its multiple meanings are expressed quite well.
5/6/2006 c1 acccountkiller
Yikes! Very memorable, and impressive...what an ending...sort of like the loss of innocence to me...good job! Freaky! Love, mia
Yikes! Very memorable, and impressive...what an ending...sort of like the loss of innocence to me...good job! Freaky! Love, mia
4/2/2006 c1 ovp
wow death by jam... thats cool
wow death by jam... thats cool
3/21/2006 c1 14Juni
Intriguing. . . kind of creepy, but beautiful. "Tangy, kaleidoscopic flavors" is probably my favorite part. . . it made my picture a mouth full of rainbow light. . .*shrug*Awesome!
14JuniIntriguing. . . kind of creepy, but beautiful. "Tangy, kaleidoscopic flavors" is probably my favorite part. . . it made my picture a mouth full of rainbow light. . .*shrug*Awesome!
3/14/2006 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
wow its like smthg being so much of a part of you then killing you.. tho i think i completely missed the point of it :S. i like the strawberry jam tho; very nice touch!
and thanks for reviewing my piece, im glad you liked it! i figured if im having this problem then so must someone else out there :P thanks again ;)
3Cry Tears of Darknesswow its like smthg being so much of a part of you then killing you.. tho i think i completely missed the point of it :S. i like the strawberry jam tho; very nice touch!
and thanks for reviewing my piece, im glad you liked it! i figured if im having this problem then so must someone else out there :P thanks again ;)
3/9/2006 c1 Dashdam
Caramel, beloved, you have one dark mind.
Caramel, beloved, you have one dark mind.