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8/27/2006 c1

65Aquafied
slippery

that is something i havent seen before.highly slippery indeed.

8/27/2006 c1

42crinkled aster ribbon
absolutely beautiful. The last two verses are to die for.

8/11/2006 c1

31Leaving Here
i like it. makes sense. i love the last line.

~Liz

8/4/2006 c1 do not resuscitate
last three lines = awesome. beautiful poem, throughout.

5/27/2006 c1

23sunkist deathmints
I love EVERYTHING of yours.

I won't comment on everything because that would annoy you and because I couldn't think of so many different ways to say that your writing is beautiful.

All I have to say is that Push.com would probably want to publish you.

5/13/2006 c1

57Jessicka-scab
Fuck the same damn thing! This is bloody genius! How can you not write anymore?

3/9/2006 c1 a lonely september
what's the same? it's written a little differently, and it's so beautiful. you did a lovely job.