for space1/10/2007 c1 
11Delirium Batharie
All I can say is that I wish I said your words to my problem weeks ago, because there's still a lot of hatred on my mind and it's turning into guilt. How DOES that work...?
Anywho, amazing job. I give you kudos! :]
11Delirium BatharieAll I can say is that I wish I said your words to my problem weeks ago, because there's still a lot of hatred on my mind and it's turning into guilt. How DOES that work...?
Anywho, amazing job. I give you kudos! :]
5/2/2006 c1 Martin Peterson
Interesting, almost contradictory nature of the first stanza, especially the first and last lines of it. As though you can't be bothered to speak your hate, and yet can't stop yourself. You don't care enough to say "I hate you", and yet climb mountains, etc, to gesture. Interesting. Says something about human nature.
Matt
Interesting, almost contradictory nature of the first stanza, especially the first and last lines of it. As though you can't be bothered to speak your hate, and yet can't stop yourself. You don't care enough to say "I hate you", and yet climb mountains, etc, to gesture. Interesting. Says something about human nature.
Matt
3/28/2006 c1 the naked civil servant
i am in entranced openmouthed AWE of the last two orgasmic shell-like atrophied lines. they are perfection personified, & they live at the end of my bed.
i am in entranced openmouthed AWE of the last two orgasmic shell-like atrophied lines. they are perfection personified, & they live at the end of my bed.
3/18/2006 c1 73Jezsh
wow, this is like a whiplash. Wonderful powerful spitting words, such a luscious image. Love it.
73Jezshwow, this is like a whiplash. Wonderful powerful spitting words, such a luscious image. Love it.
3/14/2006 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Favorite line: "And 'fuckoff' runs through my veins." Hehehe. Who can't relate to that? Some people just make you want to scream. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesFavorite line: "And 'fuckoff' runs through my veins." Hehehe. Who can't relate to that? Some people just make you want to scream. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
3/12/2006 c1 80citrus scented
wow...this is just one big mesh of beautiful powerful caotic emotions...all laid out so vividly. wicked; love it. so much attitude its just delicious.
80citrus scentedwow...this is just one big mesh of beautiful powerful caotic emotions...all laid out so vividly. wicked; love it. so much attitude its just delicious.
3/10/2006 c1 194Aslan Israel
I love the length you go to describing this... and sometimes silence says it all..
Beautiful.
194Aslan IsraelI love the length you go to describing this... and sometimes silence says it all..
Beautiful.